Orange Movie Corrections by Kranthi

Orange Movie Corrections - Kranthi
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After watching the movie I thought the below corrections would make the movie more appealing and possibly might generate a HIT talk.

   To make the below changes to the movie Orange, I guess it would take one day.

1.       Cut the scenes of Ramcharan’s introduction from where he says “Maniddaram vidipodam” until “Nenu ninnu preminchalenu”. Reason: From the audience point of view it looks odd. It was very close up shot. Imagine some one comes so near to your face (like 5 inches close to your face) and shouts at you. It irritates you right? Though the scene doesn’t irritate the audience, it doesn’t give a pleasant start to the movie.

2.       By removing the above scene: Ramcharan’s introduction appears as  --- Ramcharan driving the car with a serious look --- Stops the car near the huge wall and paints THE END. This would raise curiosity in the minds of audience and would be a perfect start for the movie. This way the movie gets an interesting and pleasant start.

3.       After the cops arrive at the place, its very unconvincing to see the cops listening to a life time story of a person, that too after a fight. The scene can be changed as below: The cops would get ready to take Ramcharan to the police station because of the road side nuisance and Prakash Raj, being an Indian wants to help him, so he convinces the other officers and then send them back. Then Prakash Raj asks him about the problem. (Actually after 80% of the movie is completed, there is a scene where Prakash raj tells the officers that everything is fine. Move that scene here)

4.      For ethical reasons cut the scene where kid says I love you to the teacher and cut the scenes of Ramcharan's love at the age of 16 years (Isn't it infatuation at this age?) . Cut the scenes where Ramcharan says No No No..I will start the story from here and again saying No No No from here. Instead directly go to the story where he sees Genelia for first time. (In other words cut the crap)

5.       Genelia’s introduction: This irritates a lot mainly because of the voice. Suppress the dubbing voice and just play a nice music. Suppress the voice until the scene where Genelia attempts to pinch the cheeks of a guy.

6.       Please cut the scenes where Genelia gets excited and jumps like a kid, when she receives a text message from a guy. (Very irritating scene)

7.       Cut the scenes introducing an ex lover (Madhurima). Its not required. Why should anyone introduce an ex-lover, as if though some thing was achieved by the hero.  Kontha kaalam preminchatam is a concept believed by the hero (actually the director). So, introducing an ex lover as an achievement is ridiculous. I am sure the hero’s character doesn’t want to spoil the new relationship that he is trying to build.

8.       Just before the Nenu nuvvantu song, Ramcharan says .."preminchukundaama". Cut this dialogue. Is preminchukovatam a schedule?( like lunch, dinner etc. ).

9.       After skydiving fight..Ramcharan comes to the golf course to meet Prabhu. In the conversation he says “Janu, kontha kaalame preminchukundaam ante confuse avuthundi” Cut this dialog. The hero cannot boast of as if though he is achieving some thing by telling that.

10.    Before the flashback of Rooba : Ramcharan tells Prakash raj “sare ikkada nunchi chepthaanu”. Cut ikkada nunchi from the dialogue and it should be “sare chepthaanu”. (As we removed ikkadnunchi chepthaanu…No No No scenes earlier). The audience is already involved in the story. So “sare chepthaanu” should be fine

11.    In the flashback there should be few more scenes to show that love is reducing over the period. This will have a strong impact and looks convincing that love reduces over the period of time. Audience can see how it is reducing. This is the heart of the movie concept, ie audience understanding that love reduces over a period of time. The only reasons shown were: Rooba not liking his friends (ok valid reason) and not liking Ramcharan smoking (not a valid reason)

12.    In the last ten minutes, in some of the serious scenes involved between Ram and Genelia, the background music should be changed. We hear some drum sounds, which is not good. Playing a tune of a song would work.

13.    Prabhu realizes that Ram is the best guy and leaves the place. Play Nagababu’s voice telling “Naa kenduko nuvve mosa poyavani anipisthundi……kaaranalathone migilipothaavu”. Show it as Ramcharan remembers this and takes a final decision to give up graffiti for Genelia.

14. The ending of the movie is very abrupt. If there are any edited scenes left in the lab….add some of them or repeat some important scenes. Imagine how good it would be  to show in the end:  Ramcharan painting “THE BEGINNING” on the huge wall.

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 With the above corrections, I am sure Orange would generate HIT talk, The mistakes mentioned above disturbed the audience mind. By correcting them the audience would walk out happily. Yes, most of the times small changes can reverse the movie fate.
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